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એમ તો આપણે સૌ હરતાં ફરતાં હોઇએ છીએ 
અર્થ એનો એ તો નથી કે જીવતાં હોઇએ છીએ 

અરિસા તો યુગોથી છેતરતાં રહ્યા છે આપણને
નથી હોતાં, જેવાં એમાં દિસતાં હોઇએ છીએ 

અકબંધ રાખવાં આપણા આનંદોની આબરૂં ! 
વસ્ત્ર વેદનાનું નિરંતર સિવતાં હોઇએ છીએ 

અણગમતાં કૈંક વરસોને લગાવી દઈ દાવમાં 
મન મ્હોર્યાની ક્ષણ એક જીતતાં હોઇએ છીએ

Comments

Anonymous said…
સરસ , રચના છે ,,
Anonymous said…
Hello Pranavbhai...

I saw your blog first time today and thought... How could I have missed it before?

This and sambandh vadi rachanaao khubj gami...

Very nice blog!

Thanks...

"UrmiSaagar"
www.urmi.wordpress.com
Anonymous said…
goooooood..we are waiting for lot from u...
-mukesh
Anonymous said…
wooow !!!! it is surprising to know your novel area of operations !!!! good ! very good !! Luckily I came to know via USA (?) and delighted to know your creativity.. Hope to get more and more from you...

-Madhvani KD
Anonymous said…
dj_janakrai@yahoo.com dear i m d j mankad. now d g m in s b of indore. i knew about your website for gujarati. i m quite happy to go through it. i hope more & more value addition in it in times to come. my best wishes to u & to ur new idea ok d j mankad . incidentally g d patel forwarded me this from usa.
Bhavin Majithia said…
feeling glad to read something in Gujarati...
Pranav, could you please let me know how you did it...

Thanks,
bhavin.majithia@gmail.com
Anonymous said…
Dear Pranav,
Namshkar.....
to see, your website at our home,
with my family, is a lovely experience to read in Gujarati. My son jaydip read all your creations
with pleasure. We are proud of you.
Keep it up....and all the best wishes............
from all of us.
Vijay Dholakia
jay_vijaydholakia@yahoo.co.in
Anonymous said…
એમ તો આપણે સૌ હરતાં ફરતાં હોઇએ છીએ
Beautiful. I like it.
Most appropriate for present times.
Regards.
jbavisi@hotmail.com
Anonymous said…
dear pranvbhai

very nice creation....poem...and liluchham parn

congratulation......

sanjay j mehta
rajkot 1.55 a.m
Anonymous said…
પ્રણવભાઈ
સુંદર રચના છે

નીલા
મેઘધનુષ
http://shivshiva.wordpress.com/